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Over the past four years, an unlikely coalition of criminal justice advocates and former Department of Correction commissioners has pushed for federal intervention at Rikers Island, urging the judge overseeing the troubled jail complex to appoint an independent outsider to take control.
They contended that meaningful reform is impossible without empowering leadership with the authority to implement sweeping changes.
Last Tuesday, Manhattan Chief District Judge Laura Taylor Swain agreed to appoint an independent “remediation manager” to move forward with long-stalled reforms. However, she made it clear that this role would not carry the broad powers of a full-fledged receiver, a step many had long advocated for.
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Despite the limited scope of the ruling, the Legal Aid Society—plaintiffs in the landmark Nunez case that resulted in a 2015 consent decree mandating jail reforms—welcomed the judge’s decision and even referred to the newly created position as a “receiver,” despite the court’s more restrained language.
But for many former Department of Correction officials and insiders, the decision raised more questions than it answered—chief among them: Who will actually be in charge?
Is it Mayor Eric Adams? DOC Commissioner Lynelle Maginley-Liddie? The soon-to-be-named remediation manager? Court-appointed monitor Steve Martin? Or Judge Swain herself?
Michael Jacobson, who led the DOC under Mayor Giuliani, called the ruling “unbelievably confusing and unclear.”
“Whoever this remediation manager turns out to be is going to need a serious meeting with the court to clarify how this is all supposed to work,” he said.
Martin Horn, who served as Correction Commissioner during the Bloomberg administration, echoed that sentiment.
“I think the judge tried to split the baby,” he told THE CITY, pointing out that Swain deliberately avoided calling the appointee a “receiver,” opting instead for the more narrowly defined title of “remediation manager.”
Mary Lynne Werlwas, director of the Prisoners’ Rights Project at Legal Aid, declined to weigh in for now.
“Per the Court’s order, we’ll be filing our feedback or objections by June 27, so we’d like to reserve comment until then,” she said.
